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Three Fairy Tales I Wrote When I Was a Kid
- 1 - Once upon a time, in the woods deep under all the brambles their was a castle that belonged to an ogre. Everyone would tell storys like: All of the kings knights and the Emperor's best warriors tried to kill the ogre but every time someone went to the ogre's castle he would never come back, and every body beleved the storys . But one day one of the emperors strongest and bravest warrior went up to the castle in the woods and saw that the castle did not belong to an ogre at all it was completly emty. He started to run back to the castle but then he stoped dead in his tracks there was the ogre. " what are you ", the warrior didn't wait to hear the the rest he pulled out his sword and stabed the ogre and the ogre ran far into the woods and was never seen again and as for the warrior he just walked back to the castle. - 2 - CINDERELLA Once upon a time there was a girl named Cinderella. She lived with her stepmother and stepsisters. Anistasha and Derazella.Cinderella's stepmother was so jelus of Cinderella's beauty that she was forsed to be a maid in her own house. And then she went to the ball .When Cinderella got there she saw many other maids, but when the prince saw Cinderella that was the only maid he would dance whith.they danced and danced until the clock strok 12 Cinderella had to run but luckly she losed one of her glass slipers, that chered the prince up - 3 - Once upon a time there was a Little Red Riding Hood .Her grandmother was not feeling well so Little Red Riding Hood had go to her house to bring some goodies to her. On the way she met a wolf "good evening",said the wolf "where are you going"? 'To grandmothers house "I know a short -cut to grandmothers house'.' little red riding hood obeyed the wolf. The wolf ran to grandmothers house and tied her up . Then the wolf put on grandmothers clothes and jumed into her bed then little red riding hood ran inthe door she was surprised "Why grandmother what big teeth you have ."the wolf jumped out of bed''THE BETER TO EAT YOU WITH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! BUT THEN THE WOOD CUTER CAME AND KILLED THE WOLF! and rescued grandmother. They lived happily ever after the end.
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Two of them seem vaguely familiar. That said, I particularly like the use of bold face, extensive exclamatory punctuation, and all Caps. I think I still write like this!!!!!
ALso, I have to say, I really enjoyed the line “and as for the warrior he just walked back to the castle.” It just sounds like classic storytelling.
Comment by Kevin — 20 February 2010 @ 1:06 pm
I like that Cinderella thought to include a couple of hores [sic] for her godmother.
Comment by Amy — 26 February 2010 @ 3:39 pm